Mikeywales Posted November 12, 2013 Share Posted November 12, 2013 A little design i came up with "That Much Further West" also a song title by Lucero. Prismacolors on black card! Let me know your thoughts, thanks :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CultExciter Posted November 12, 2013 Share Posted November 12, 2013 Let me know your thoughts, thanks :) Hey bud, next time post this in the "How about an art show" thread. It's where we keep these sorts of thoughts/musings/opinions. And honest critique...you need to expand your tones. You need to find ways to use complimentary colors and shades/tones to create separation. Otherwise, it looks like one big blob. Keep it up though, practice and trial and error is the only way you will progress. hogg 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mikeywales Posted November 12, 2013 Author Share Posted November 12, 2013 Cheers, sorry i didn't realise there was an existing thread titled that. Thanks for the constructive criticism! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sneaken1 Posted November 13, 2013 Share Posted November 13, 2013 I like the idea, in my opinion the lettering / font seems off. Maybe it needs an outline or something to tie it into the scroll a little more. Kind of looks tacked on. Also curious on the size of it, maybe add a coin next to it for a visual reference. I'm no pro artist but just my thoughts, keep at it man! Peace, Ken Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pyzik Posted November 13, 2013 Share Posted November 13, 2013 I am new to the tattoo world so my opinion may not hold much weight, but I think that is awesome! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mikeywales Posted November 18, 2013 Author Share Posted November 18, 2013 Yeah i thought that as well, i haven't really had much experience with lettering, definitely something i need to work on! Thanks for the tips, much appreciated, and thanks for looking! Mike. - - - Updated - - - Thanks a lot, much appreciated for checking it out! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hogg Posted November 18, 2013 Share Posted November 18, 2013 I'm not a tattooer, but I have never liked script on a banner. My $0.02. Gregor 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mikeywales Posted November 18, 2013 Author Share Posted November 18, 2013 I did this one is a spur of the moment thing, i just wanted to get it finished. Thanks for looking hogg! :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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